Day 6

Editing my story. It will be done the week after vacation now that I have enough time. I don't know if anyone took up the opportunity to draw hipster sketches for my article but I hope they did. If not, I have a google chart and I'll be able to pull photos from somewhere, I'm sure. Perhaps pictures that demonstrate the evolution of hipsters, from the 30s and 60s and 90s until now.

Day 5

ALMOST DONE!

I think my first feature is nearly there. I've connected all my thoughts and it flows nicely. It gets my point across rather clearly which I am very pleased about. I'm glad it has taken the direction that it has. The only thing I need now it some sort of quotation or two, which I'm still undecided about. Truthfully, I'd like to leave other people out of it all together and turn it into more of an opinion piece, because it essentially is but without saying "I". That would be simpler and smoother. Since I am writing about a social issue there is not much fact. There is only what I've observed and what I believe to be true. It's sort of a sneaky opinion piece because you can't really tell right away. I think. But my other approach is to turn to academic essays and pull quotations from professionals while simultaneously making it seem relevant. That would be much more relevant than having student interviews. I'm not too worried about connecting with the TA audience because the topic of hipsters is not an obscure one (which is ironic) because most everyone (especially the students) know what hipsters are already. So I don't need to interview students in order to draw them in. Though, it would draw them in more I feel like the rest of the article would suffer from it.

Day 4

My piece is coming together. I hope to be done by the end of the week. I still need an interview or quote of some kind but I am wary of it because interviewing students would be seemingly random for such a short piece. I may pull quotes from academic essays. Otherwise, I'd just have a quote from this random person and that random person, neither of whom have anything to do with hipsters (necessarily). I don't want to go up to people who I think look like hipsters because that could be a sticky situation. I'd feel best about quoting a reliable source

Day 3

Shortened class because of unnecessary amounts of drug questions.

working on story more. Getting more information on the origins of hipsterism in other decades.

http://www.time.com/time/arts/article/0,8599,1913220,00.html

Day 2

Wrote more and edited article. Struggling with how much there is to cover about hipsters, and how much great research has already been done! A fascinating topic to me, but there is a lot of it. Need to focus in and make it relevant to TA. Need interviews. Doesn't matter with who, as long as I get a variety of opinions.

Also, while writing today I had an epiphany about hipster and therefore the central idea of my article has been modified.

Day 1 to Feb. Vacation

Mrs. Hall, I am sharing my google doc of my hipster feature so you can monitor my progress. I have a good start and have been building the story since the first class of the semester. It should be finished a few classes from now. My goal with the story is to entertain and educate. I want to define what a hipster is (as more than a fashion trend) and also defend them (lightly because it's a light "issue") as a social group that is often the butt of the joke.

I've contacted Mrs. Merry and she will announce the opportunity to sketch hipsters for my article. Hopefully I will have those by March 1st, which is the deadline I set for the students.

http://thehipstereffect.com/2012/04/02/a-new-definition-of-hipster/

SEMESTER 2

Features:

• Ireland journal log
• Hipsters

Extras:

• Where's Waldo? spread
• Pepperell Squares profile

final

changing the face of feminism.

why we still need feminism

feminism lesson for young people. don't be afraid of feminism. 

http://jezebel.com/5975076/paul-ryan-once-again-sponsors-the-bill-that-would-make-it-possible-for-womens-rapists-to-sue-them (conservatives are dying out but are still in power)

http://www.dayswithoutagoprapemention.com/

http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/45755822/ns/msnbc-the_ed_show/#49561743

http://thinkprogress.org/justice/2012/10/28/1101761/gingrich-mourdocks-comments-every-catholic-believes/?mobile=nc

Let's be honest. I wouldn't be the feminist I am if not for the amount of time I spend on the internet having discussions and reading blogposts like this one about why feminism should or should not still be relevant in todays culture.

Here is what I believe to be true: this is the 21st century. As much as we'd like to believe we live in a utopian society that has moved on from our prejudiced past, that's just not the case. Old habits die hard, and sometimes don't die at all. As a people, we are victims of social conditioning. Our culture has general perceptions of different groups of people as a result of our country's past.

The first time I was called a slut, I was 11 years old. I didn't think much of it. I had a strong head on my shoulders and knew it was a comment that arose from nothing, especially because, well, I was 11 and had no sexual experience or promiscuity of any kind.

And it's not like from that moment forward I was inspired to become a feminist and empower people everywhere about women rights and denounce slut-shamers and victim-blamers. No. It hasn't been until 5 years later and I am sixteen years old that I reflect upon this befuddling moment of name-calling and consider how we, the people, box up sexuality

Feminism first arose in the early 20th century when women fought for the right to vote. It was a political and social movement back then. 100 years later, women and men officially have all the same legal rights. Women can have all the same jobs as men and become a successful, innovative part of the American workforce. But this doesn't mean that it happens. On average, women earn ___ less than men. And that's just white women. Women of color earn ___ of what men earn.


Feminism is a very dear issue to me as a female and as a human. Let's define feminism as equal rights for women in relation to men politically, economically, socially, and all areas of living.

For me, becoming a feminist has greatly increased my awareness of mens issues.

Rape culture is any sort of tolerance or condoning of rape or sexual assault as well as behaviors or attitudes that sexually oppress people such as slut-shaming or victim blaming. A large part of feminism that is circulating in todays society would not exist without issues stemming from rape culture, which, yes, exists in todays society.

Females now have this internalized fear of being out alone at night. We are cautious when men look at us, let alone talk to us. This is a fear that women deal with daily. Not only should women not have to deal with this, it is also a stab to men because, last time I checked, not all men are creepy pervert-rapists.  But these fears do not stem from nothing. They are not a small issue, they are the result of a huge issue. 1 in 3 women are raped every year in the US.

We need to stop thinking about rape and sexual violence as something that only happens to women.

What guys need to understand is that if they say a girl was asking to be raped because of what she was wearing, it is an offense to themselves because they are saying they have no self-control.

To treat women and men not as women and men but as people. As human beings. We need to teach consent. We need to teach that women can also be perpetrators of sexual violence. We need to be understanding and accepting of everyones rights and comfort zones. The only way to fight ignorance is with education.